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Q1Language analysis of two paragraphs · Core · Paper 1 style · 15 marks

Read the text carefully, then answer the question. Paragraph numbers are shown in brackets.Text: The kite on the roof(1) My grandfather's house in the old city had a flat roof, and every spring, on the morning of the kite festival, the whole family climbed the narrow stairs before breakfast. I was nine that year and had been promised, at last, that I could fly a kite of my own.(2) From the roof the city looked like a crowded chessboard of other roofs, each one alive with people. Music thudded from loudspeakers somewhere to the east. Above us the sky was already freckled with kites: paper diamonds in lime green and hot pink, swooping and stalling like nervous birds, their strings glinting in the low sun. The air smelled of fried pakoras, diesel and the dusty sweetness of marigolds strung along the parapet.(3) Grandfather handed me the reel as if it were something precious. "Let the wind do the work," he said. "You only listen." I ran three steps, the kite lifted, dipped, and then — miraculously — climbed, tugging at my fingers like a small animal desperate to escape.(4) For a few minutes I was a king. My kite, purple with a white tail, rode higher and higher until it was a tiny flickering stamp against the blue. Then another kite slid towards it, sly as a crocodile in a river, and the two strings crossed. My line went taut, hummed, and suddenly fell limp in my hands. I watched my kite drift away over the rooftops, turning slowly, already somebody else's prize, while shouts of triumph rose from a roof three streets away. Something hot and heavy climbed into my throat.(5) I expected to be laughed at. Instead, Grandfather sat down beside me on an upturned bucket and began to tell me about the first kite he had lost, sixty years earlier, on the same roof. By the time he finished, my tears had dried, and he had quietly tied a new kite to my reel.

  1. (a) Reread paragraphs 2 and 4.• Paragraph 2: the view from the roof on the morning of the festival.• Paragraph 4: the narrator's kite being cut free.Explain how the writer uses language to convey meaning and to create effect in these paragraphs. Choose three examples of words or phrases from each paragraph to support your answer. Your choices should include the use of imagery. Write about 200 to 300 words. [15]
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  1. (a) Paragraph 2: The city is 'a crowded chessboard of other roofs', an image that suggests a vast pattern of squares seen from above and hints at a game about to be played, fitting the competitive kite-flying. The sky is 'freckled with kites', a gentle image that makes the kites seem like countless small spots of colour scattered across a face, suggesting how many there are and the cheerful, natural feel of the festival. They swoop 'like nervous birds', which makes them seem alive and unpredictable, hinting at the danger ahead. The mix of smells ('fried pakoras, diesel and the dusty sweetness of marigolds') appeals to the senses and conveys a crowded, joyful, slightly chaotic scene.Paragraph 4: 'I was a king' shows the child's sense of power and pride. The kite becomes 'a tiny flickering stamp', showing how high it has climbed and how fragile it now looks. The rival kite slides 'sly as a crocodile in a river', a menacing simile suggesting a hidden predator that strikes silently, so the reader senses the attack before the narrator does. The line 'hummed' then 'fell limp', a sudden change from tension to emptiness that mirrors the child's disappointment. 'Something hot and heavy climbed into my throat' conveys tears and humiliation physically, without naming the feeling.Overall, the writer moves from colour and excitement to loss, making the grandfather's kindness in paragraph 5 more touching.
    Suggested choices: P2: 'crowded chessboard'; 'alive with people'; 'thudded'; 'freckled with kites'; 'swooping and stalling like nervous birds'; 'strings glinting'; smells list. P4: 'I was a king'; 'tiny flickering stamp'; 'slid … sly as a crocodile in a river'; 'went taut, hummed'; 'fell limp'; 'already somebody else's prize'; 'something hot and heavy climbed into my throat'. Level 5 (13–15): wide-ranging, precise and often original explanation of meaning and effect, with well-chosen images analysed in context and a clear sense of the writer's overall purpose; Level 4 (10–12): convincing explanation of a range of suitable choices, including imagery; Level 3 (7–9): some explanation of effects for mostly appropriate choices, but sometimes general; Level 2 (4–6): relevant choices with a basic attempt at meaning, effects thin or generalised ('it helps the reader imagine'); Level 1 (1–3): choices listed with little or no explanation, or misread; 0: nothing creditable. An answer that deals with only one paragraph, or gives three choices in total, should not normally go beyond Level 3.
Q2Language analysis of two paragraphs · Core · Paper 1 style · 15 marks

Read the text carefully, then answer the question. Paragraph numbers are shown in brackets.Text: Shinjuku at eight(1) My cousin had warned me that the station would be busy, but no warning could have prepared me. I had been in Tokyo for exactly one day, my Japanese consisted of four polite phrases, and I had to change trains at eight o'clock on a Monday morning.(2) The moment the doors opened, the crowd carried me out like a leaf on a fast river. Thousands of people in dark suits moved in every direction at once, yet nobody collided; they flowed around one another with the silent precision of a shoal of fish. Announcements chimed overhead in a bright, cheerful voice I could not understand, and signs in three alphabets flashed and scrolled until my eyes ached.(3) I stopped to look at my phone and was immediately an obstacle. A man swerved, murmured something apologetic, and was gone. I stepped against a pillar and tried to find the platform number my cousin had written on a scrap of paper.(4) The map on the wall was a tangle of coloured lines, like a plate of noodles dropped on the floor. I traced one with my finger, lost it, and traced it again. My heart was hammering, and my shirt stuck to my back. All around me the river of people kept rushing past, indifferent and endless, and I felt suddenly very small, a single grain of rice in an enormous bowl. I thought about my mother telling me I was not ready to travel alone, and about how much I had wanted to prove her wrong.(5) Then an elderly woman with a shopping trolley stopped beside me. She looked at my piece of paper, nodded, and without a word set off, glancing back to make sure I was following. She led me up two escalators and along a corridor to the right platform, bowed, and disappeared into the crowd before I could even thank her properly.

  1. (a) Reread paragraphs 2 and 4.• Paragraph 2: the narrator's first moments in the crowd.• Paragraph 4: the narrator trying to read the map.Explain how the writer uses language to convey meaning and to create effect in these paragraphs. Choose three examples of words or phrases from each paragraph to support your answer. Your choices should include the use of imagery. Write about 200 to 300 words. [15]
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  1. (a) Paragraph 2: 'The crowd carried me out like a leaf on a fast river' shows the narrator's helplessness: the narrator is light, small and swept along by an uncontrollable force. 'Thousands of people … moved in every direction at once' conveys the overwhelming scale. Yet they flow 'with the silent precision of a shoal of fish', an image suggesting perfect, instinctive coordination, which contrasts with the narrator, the only one who does not know the pattern. The announcements in a 'bright, cheerful voice I could not understand' are ironic: cheerful for others, meaningless to the narrator. Signs that 'flashed and scrolled until my eyes ached' show sensory overload.Paragraph 4: The map 'like a plate of noodles dropped on the floor' is a humorous but vivid simile for a confusing tangle of lines. 'Traced one … lost it, and traced it again' uses repetition to show the narrator's frustration. 'Heart was hammering' and 'shirt stuck to my back' give physical signs of panic. The crowd is a 'river of people … indifferent and endless', continuing the earlier image and stressing that nobody notices the narrator. 'A single grain of rice in an enormous bowl' conveys how insignificant and lost the narrator feels. The memory of the mother's warning adds pride and self-doubt.Overall, the writer builds a sense of isolation so that the old woman's quiet kindness has more impact.
    Suggested choices: P2: 'like a leaf on a fast river'; 'every direction at once'; 'silent precision of a shoal of fish'; 'bright, cheerful voice I could not understand'; 'flashed and scrolled until my eyes ached'. P4: 'like a plate of noodles dropped on the floor'; 'traced … lost it … traced it again'; 'heart was hammering'; 'river of people … indifferent and endless'; 'a single grain of rice in an enormous bowl'. Level 5 (13–15): wide-ranging, precise and often original explanation of meaning and effect, with well-chosen images analysed in context and a clear sense of the writer's overall purpose; Level 4 (10–12): convincing explanation of a range of suitable choices, including imagery; Level 3 (7–9): some explanation of effects for mostly appropriate choices, but sometimes general; Level 2 (4–6): relevant choices with a basic attempt at meaning, effects thin or generalised ('it helps the reader imagine'); Level 1 (1–3): choices listed with little or no explanation, or misread; 0: nothing creditable. An answer that deals with only one paragraph, or gives three choices in total, should not normally go beyond Level 3.
Q3Language analysis of two paragraphs · Core · Paper 1 style · 15 marks

Read the text carefully, then answer the question. Paragraph numbers are shown in brackets.Text: Fog at the junction(1) The train from Lahore was due at the small junction at nine in the evening. At eleven, the stationmaster wrote "Late" on the blackboard in chalk and went back into his office. By midnight, nobody even looked at the board any more.(2) The fog had come down at dusk, thick and silent, swallowing first the fields, then the signal post, then the far end of the platform. The single lamp above the ticket window wore a fuzzy halo of light, and beyond it the world simply stopped, as if someone had hung a dirty grey curtain across the tracks. Every so often a figure would loom out of the whiteness, a porter with a trolley or a man wrapped in a blanket, and dissolve again a few steps later like a ghost walking through a wall.(3) About twenty passengers waited on the benches. A family shared roti from a cloth bundle; a student slept with his head on his rucksack; two old men played cards by the light of a mobile phone. The tea seller, who should have gone home hours before, kept his little stove alight and refilled cups without being asked.(4) The cold was the worst of it. It seeped up from the concrete through the soles of my shoes and crept inside my sleeves and collar, patient and determined. My fingers ached around the hot glass of tea. Somewhere out in the fog a dog barked, once, and the sound seemed to come from everywhere at once. When a train whistle finally sounded, faint and far away, the whole platform held its breath; heads lifted like birds hearing a hawk.(5) It was a goods train, rattling slowly through without stopping. Nobody complained. The tea seller simply put more water on to boil, and one of the card players began, very softly, to sing.

  1. (a) Reread paragraphs 2 and 4.• Paragraph 2: the fog at the station.• Paragraph 4: the cold and the sound of a whistle.Explain how the writer uses language to convey meaning and to create effect in these paragraphs. Choose three examples of words or phrases from each paragraph to support your answer. Your choices should include the use of imagery. Write about 200 to 300 words. [15]
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  1. (a) Paragraph 2: The fog is 'thick and silent', and it is personified as 'swallowing first the fields, then the signal post, then the far end of the platform', a list that shows its steady advance and makes it seem like a creature eating the world. The lamp 'wore a fuzzy halo of light', suggesting softness and isolation. 'As if someone had hung a dirty grey curtain across the tracks' conveys how completely the world ends beyond the platform, with 'dirty' giving an unpleasant tone. Figures 'loom' and 'dissolve … like a ghost walking through a wall', creating an eerie, dreamlike atmosphere.Paragraph 4: 'The cold was the worst of it' is blunt and direct. Cold 'seeped up' and 'crept', personified as 'patient and determined', making it seem like an enemy that cannot be resisted. Fingers that 'ached around the hot glass' show the contrast of warmth and cold. The dog's bark that 'seemed to come from everywhere at once' shows how the fog distorts sound and adds unease. When the whistle sounds, 'the whole platform held its breath', personifying the crowd as one body united by hope, and 'heads lifted like birds hearing a hawk' captures their sudden alertness.Overall, the writer creates a mood of weary, shared waiting, which makes the anticlimax of the goods train, and the kindness of the tea seller, more effective.
    Suggested choices: P2: 'thick and silent'; 'swallowing first the fields …'; 'wore a fuzzy halo'; 'dirty grey curtain'; 'loom'; 'like a ghost walking through a wall'. P4: 'seeped up'; 'crept … patient and determined'; 'ached around the hot glass'; 'seemed to come from everywhere at once'; 'the whole platform held its breath'; 'heads lifted like birds hearing a hawk'. Level 5 (13–15): wide-ranging, precise and often original explanation of meaning and effect, with well-chosen images analysed in context and a clear sense of the writer's overall purpose; Level 4 (10–12): convincing explanation of a range of suitable choices, including imagery; Level 3 (7–9): some explanation of effects for mostly appropriate choices, but sometimes general; Level 2 (4–6): relevant choices with a basic attempt at meaning, effects thin or generalised ('it helps the reader imagine'); Level 1 (1–3): choices listed with little or no explanation, or misread; 0: nothing creditable. An answer that deals with only one paragraph, or gives three choices in total, should not normally go beyond Level 3.
Q4Language analysis of two paragraphs · Core · Paper 1 style · 15 marks

Read the text carefully, then answer the question. Paragraph numbers are shown in brackets.Text: Halfway across the lake(1) The lake swim was two kilometres, from the boathouse to the jetty on the far shore. Sana had trained for it in the school pool all winter, length after length beneath the buzzing lights, but she had never swum in open water further than she could stand.(2) At the start, the water was a shock: cold enough to snatch the breath from her lungs, and dark, so that her own hands vanished a few centimetres below the surface. Around her, two hundred swimmers churned forward in a frenzy of arms and white foam, like a pot coming to the boil. Someone's heel struck her shoulder; someone else swam straight over her legs. She swallowed a mouthful of the lake, which tasted of mud and weeds, and came up coughing.(3) Gradually the crowd thinned out. She found a rhythm — breathe, stroke, stroke, breathe — and began to sight on the yellow buoys that marked the course, lifting her eyes every few strokes the way her coach had shown her.(4) Halfway across, her left calf seized. The pain was sudden and savage, as though a fist had clenched around the muscle and was twisting it. Her leg became a useless weight dragging her down. Panic rose in her like floodwater, and for a second she thrashed, gulping air and water together. The far shore looked impossibly distant, a thin green line wobbling on the horizon. Then she rolled onto her back, as she had been taught, and floated, staring up at a sky so wide and calm that it seemed to be holding her up. A kayak glided alongside, and a steward asked if she wanted to be pulled out.(5) She shook her head. When the cramp eased, she turned over and swam on, slowly, favouring the leg. She finished in the last twenty, shivering and grinning, and her father, waiting on the jetty, wrapped her in a towel without saying a word.

  1. (a) Reread paragraphs 2 and 4.• Paragraph 2: the start of the race.• Paragraph 4: the cramp halfway across the lake.Explain how the writer uses language to convey meaning and to create effect in these paragraphs. Choose three examples of words or phrases from each paragraph to support your answer. Your choices should include the use of imagery. Write about 200 to 300 words. [15]
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  1. (a) Paragraph 2: The cold 'snatch[es] the breath from her lungs', personifying the water as a thief and showing its shocking impact. Her hands 'vanished' a few centimetres down, conveying the darkness and unfamiliarity of open water. The swimmers 'churned forward in a frenzy of arms and white foam, like a pot coming to the boil', an image of violent, chaotic movement and heat in contrast to the cold. The kicks and being swum over show the physical roughness of the race. Water that 'tasted of mud and weeds' makes the experience unpleasant to the senses.Paragraph 4: The cramp 'seized' her calf, a verb suggesting capture. 'As though a fist had clenched around the muscle and was twisting it' makes the pain vivid and violent. Her leg becomes 'a useless weight dragging her down', suggesting danger of sinking. 'Panic rose in her like floodwater' is a fitting image in a water setting, showing fear overwhelming her. The shore as 'a thin green line wobbling' conveys distance and her blurred vision. Then the sky 'so wide and calm that it seemed to be holding her up' marks a turning point: calm replaces panic, and nature becomes supportive.Overall, the writer contrasts chaos and calm to show Sana's courage and self-control.
    Suggested choices: P2: 'snatch the breath'; 'vanished'; 'churned forward in a frenzy'; 'like a pot coming to the boil'; 'tasted of mud and weeds'. P4: 'seized'; 'sudden and savage'; 'as though a fist had clenched'; 'useless weight dragging her down'; 'panic rose in her like floodwater'; 'thin green line wobbling'; 'seemed to be holding her up'. Level 5 (13–15): wide-ranging, precise and often original explanation of meaning and effect, with well-chosen images analysed in context and a clear sense of the writer's overall purpose; Level 4 (10–12): convincing explanation of a range of suitable choices, including imagery; Level 3 (7–9): some explanation of effects for mostly appropriate choices, but sometimes general; Level 2 (4–6): relevant choices with a basic attempt at meaning, effects thin or generalised ('it helps the reader imagine'); Level 1 (1–3): choices listed with little or no explanation, or misread; 0: nothing creditable. An answer that deals with only one paragraph, or gives three choices in total, should not normally go beyond Level 3.
Q5Language analysis of two paragraphs · Core · Paper 1 style · 15 marks

Read the text carefully, then answer the question. Paragraph numbers are shown in brackets.Text: Service(1) On her first evening as a trainee in the kitchen of a large hotel in Dubai, Mariam was given a knife, a mountain of onions and a single instruction: "Don't get in anyone's way." By seven o'clock, she understood why.(2) When the first orders arrived, the kitchen exploded into life. Flames leapt from the pans with a roar, licking upwards towards the extractor fans. Chefs shouted orders across the steel counters in four languages, and the printer by the pass chattered out ticket after ticket like a machine gun that would never run out of bullets. Waiters swept in and out through the swinging doors, and every surface hissed, clattered or steamed. The heat was astonishing; within minutes Mariam's white jacket was soaked through.(3) The head chef, a tall Sri Lankan man named Ruwan, moved through the chaos without ever seeming to hurry. He tasted everything, said very little, and occasionally pushed a plate back towards a cook with one finger, which was worse than any shout.(4) At eight, a chef on the sauce station burned his hand and was sent to the first-aid room, and Ruwan pointed at Mariam. "You. Stir. Don't stop." She found herself in front of a huge pan of sauce that bubbled and spat like a small volcano, its surface glossy and dark as melted chocolate. Her arm ached after five minutes and burned after ten. Around her, the noise rose and fell like waves crashing on rocks, but she kept her eyes on the pan and her spoon moving in slow figures of eight, terrified that if she stopped for a second, the whole thing would catch and burn.(5) At eleven, the last ticket was cleared. Ruwan walked past, dipped a spoon into her pan, tasted it, and nodded once. Mariam had never been so tired, or so happy.

  1. (a) Reread paragraphs 2 and 4.• Paragraph 2: the kitchen when the first orders arrive.• Paragraph 4: Mariam stirring the sauce.Explain how the writer uses language to convey meaning and to create effect in these paragraphs. Choose three examples of words or phrases from each paragraph to support your answer. Your choices should include the use of imagery. Write about 200 to 300 words. [15]
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  1. (a) Paragraph 2: 'The kitchen exploded into life' is a metaphor of sudden violent energy. Flames 'leapt … with a roar, licking upwards', personified as hungry animals, conveying danger. Chefs shouting 'in four languages' shows the international, crowded workplace. The printer 'like a machine gun that would never run out of bullets' suggests relentless pressure and even a battlefield. 'Every surface hissed, clattered or steamed' uses onomatopoeia to fill the scene with noise. 'The heat was astonishing' and a soaked jacket show the physical challenge.Paragraph 4: Ruwan's short commands, 'You. Stir. Don't stop.', show his authority and the urgency. The sauce 'bubbled and spat like a small volcano' conveys heat and danger, and makes the task seem dramatic. 'Glossy and dark as melted chocolate' is an appetising image showing the quality of the sauce she must protect. Her arm that 'ached after five minutes and burned after ten' shows rising pain. The noise rising and falling 'like waves crashing on rocks' contrasts with her concentrated stillness. Her fear that 'the whole thing would catch and burn' shows her sense of responsibility.Overall, the writer presents the kitchen as a battlefield and Mariam's quiet endurance as heroic, so Ruwan's nod becomes a reward.
    Suggested choices: P2: 'exploded into life'; 'leapt … with a roar, licking upwards'; 'like a machine gun that would never run out of bullets'; 'hissed, clattered or steamed'; 'astonishing'. P4: 'You. Stir. Don't stop.'; 'bubbled and spat like a small volcano'; 'glossy and dark as melted chocolate'; 'ached … and burned'; 'like waves crashing on rocks'; 'catch and burn'. Level 5 (13–15): wide-ranging, precise and often original explanation of meaning and effect, with well-chosen images analysed in context and a clear sense of the writer's overall purpose; Level 4 (10–12): convincing explanation of a range of suitable choices, including imagery; Level 3 (7–9): some explanation of effects for mostly appropriate choices, but sometimes general; Level 2 (4–6): relevant choices with a basic attempt at meaning, effects thin or generalised ('it helps the reader imagine'); Level 1 (1–3): choices listed with little or no explanation, or misread; 0: nothing creditable. An answer that deals with only one paragraph, or gives three choices in total, should not normally go beyond Level 3.
Q6Language analysis of two paragraphs · Standard · Paper 1 style · 15 marks

Read the text carefully, then answer the question. Paragraph numbers are shown in brackets.Text: The water came at four(1) It had been raining since lunchtime, but nobody in our street worried. Rain in July is normal, and the drains usually managed. I was walking home from tuition with my bag over my head when I noticed that the gutters were no longer gutters but small brown rivers.(2) By the time I reached the main road, the water was over my ankles and rising. Cars ploughed through it like reluctant buffaloes, pushing waves onto the pavement, and a rickshaw had stalled in the middle of the junction, its driver standing on the seat and shouting at nobody. Plastic bags, sandals and a child's ball spun past me. The sky had turned the colour of a bruise, and the rain no longer fell in drops but in heavy grey ropes that stung my face.(3) I tried to remember the safest way home. The lane behind the bakery was lower, so I kept to the main road, holding on to railings and shop shutters, testing each step before trusting it. Somewhere an uncovered manhole was waiting; everyone knew the stories.(4) At the corner of our street the water reached my knees, warm and thick and stinking of diesel. Our neighbour, old Mrs Zaidi, stood in her doorway clutching a birdcage to her chest, her face as white as flour. Her front room had become a pond; a cushion floated across it as slowly as a lazy duck. I waded over and took her arm. Her fingers gripped mine like the claws of a frightened bird, and together we edged along the wall towards our house, which stood two steps higher.(5) That night, eleven of us slept on our first floor, with Mrs Zaidi's canary singing in the corner as though nothing had happened. In the morning the water had gone, leaving behind a crust of mud and a smell that lasted for weeks.

  1. (a) Reread paragraphs 2 and 4.• Paragraph 2: the narrator reaching the flooded main road.• Paragraph 4: the water in the narrator's street and helping Mrs Zaidi.Explain how the writer uses language to convey meaning and to create effect in these paragraphs. Choose three examples of words or phrases from each paragraph to support your answer. Your choices should include the use of imagery. Write about 200 to 300 words. [15]
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  1. (a) Paragraph 2: The water 'rising' and over the ankles creates growing threat. Cars 'ploughed through it like reluctant buffaloes', a simile that makes the vehicles seem heavy, slow and unwilling, suggesting how deep and difficult the water has become, and adds a local, almost comic touch. The stalled rickshaw driver 'shouting at nobody' conveys helplessness and chaos. The list of 'plastic bags, sandals and a child's ball' spinning past suggests ordinary life being swept away. The sky 'the colour of a bruise' is a striking image of purple-grey darkness that also suggests injury and pain to come, and rain 'in heavy grey ropes that stung' turns the rain into something solid and violent.Paragraph 4: The water is 'warm and thick and stinking of diesel', the repeated 'and' piling up unpleasant sensations, so the reader feels disgust as well as danger. Mrs Zaidi 'clutching a birdcage' shows panic and her desire to save what she loves; her face 'as white as flour' conveys shock and fear through a domestic simile. The cushion floating 'as slowly as a lazy duck' is oddly calm, emphasising how her home has been turned into a pond. Her fingers grip 'like the claws of a frightened bird', linking her to the canary and suggesting fragility and terror. 'Edged along the wall' conveys their slow, careful movement.Overall, the writer contrasts violent nature with human vulnerability and kindness.
    Suggested choices: P2: 'rising'; 'ploughed through it like reluctant buffaloes'; 'shouting at nobody'; 'spun past'; 'the colour of a bruise'; 'heavy grey ropes that stung my face'. P4: 'warm and thick and stinking of diesel'; 'clutching a birdcage'; 'as white as flour'; 'had become a pond'; 'as slowly as a lazy duck'; 'like the claws of a frightened bird'; 'edged along the wall'. Level 5 (13–15): wide-ranging, precise and often original explanation of meaning and effect, with well-chosen images analysed in context and a clear sense of the writer's overall purpose; Level 4 (10–12): convincing explanation of a range of suitable choices, including imagery; Level 3 (7–9): some explanation of effects for mostly appropriate choices, but sometimes general; Level 2 (4–6): relevant choices with a basic attempt at meaning, effects thin or generalised ('it helps the reader imagine'); Level 1 (1–3): choices listed with little or no explanation, or misread; 0: nothing creditable. An answer that deals with only one paragraph, or gives three choices in total, should not normally go beyond Level 3.
Q7Language analysis of two paragraphs · Standard · Paper 1 style · 15 marks

Read the text carefully, then answer the question. Paragraph numbers are shown in brackets.Text: White-out(1) We were two hours from the base camp, and the glacier had been kind to us all morning: firm snow, clear sky, the peaks around us so sharp against the blue that they looked as if they had been cut out with scissors. Ayesha, our guide, kept glancing at the west, but she said nothing.(2) The cloud arrived quickly. First a thin veil slid over the ridge; then the sun became a pale coin, then a smudge, and then it was gone. Within minutes the world had been rubbed out. Snow and sky merged into one blank, milky wall, and I could not tell up from down. The only colours left were the red of Ayesha's jacket, three metres ahead, and the blue rope between us, which suddenly seemed as thin as a thread of cotton.(3) "Stop," she called. "Nobody moves." We gathered close, roped together, while she checked the compass and the map she had studied the night before. Somewhere to our left, I knew, the glacier was split by crevasses deep enough to swallow a house.(4) The wind rose and the snow came at us sideways, hissing like sand against our goggles. My fingers, even inside two pairs of gloves, felt like lumps of wood. Every sound was swallowed by the whiteness; when I shouted to the man behind me, my voice seemed to fall at my feet. I began to imagine shapes in the blankness, a tent, a rock, a figure waving, and each one dissolved as soon as I looked at it. Fear crept up my spine with cold little fingers.(5) Ayesha led us forward one careful step at a time, probing the snow with her pole. It took four hours to cover a distance we had walked in one that morning. When the tents of the camp finally appeared, like small orange lanterns in the mist, nobody cheered. We were too tired, and too grateful, to speak.

  1. (a) Reread paragraphs 2 and 4.• Paragraph 2: the arrival of the cloud on the glacier.• Paragraph 4: the storm at its worst.Explain how the writer uses language to convey meaning and to create effect in these paragraphs. Choose three examples of words or phrases from each paragraph to support your answer. Your choices should include the use of imagery. Write about 200 to 300 words. [15]
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  1. (a) Paragraph 2: The cloud begins as 'a thin veil', suggesting something light and almost gentle that hides rather than attacks. The sun fading from 'a pale coin' to 'a smudge' and then 'gone' shows step by step how quickly the light disappears. 'The world had been rubbed out' is a powerful metaphor: the landscape seems erased like a pencil drawing, conveying total disorientation. 'One blank, milky wall' makes the whiteness seem solid and blind. The only colours left, red and blue, emphasise how much has vanished, and the rope 'as thin as a thread of cotton' suggests how fragile the climbers' link to safety now feels.Paragraph 4: Snow comes 'sideways, hissing like sand', a simile that conveys its force and sound and makes the storm seem snake-like and hostile. Fingers 'like lumps of wood' convey numbness and clumsiness. 'Every sound was swallowed' personifies the whiteness as something that devours, and his voice seeming to 'fall at my feet' shows how useless communication has become. The imagined shapes that 'dissolved' reveal how the mind plays tricks under stress. 'Fear crept up my spine with cold little fingers' personifies fear as a creature, linking emotional and physical cold.Overall, the writer makes the reader share the narrator's loss of sight, sound and certainty, increasing tension before the relief of the camp.
    Suggested choices: P2: 'thin veil slid'; 'pale coin, then a smudge'; 'the world had been rubbed out'; 'one blank, milky wall'; 'as thin as a thread of cotton'. P4: 'hissing like sand'; 'fingers … like lumps of wood'; 'every sound was swallowed'; 'my voice seemed to fall at my feet'; 'dissolved'; 'fear crept up my spine with cold little fingers'. Level 5 (13–15): wide-ranging, precise and often original explanation of meaning and effect, with well-chosen images analysed in context and a clear sense of the writer's overall purpose; Level 4 (10–12): convincing explanation of a range of suitable choices, including imagery; Level 3 (7–9): some explanation of effects for mostly appropriate choices, but sometimes general; Level 2 (4–6): relevant choices with a basic attempt at meaning, effects thin or generalised ('it helps the reader imagine'); Level 1 (1–3): choices listed with little or no explanation, or misread; 0: nothing creditable. An answer that deals with only one paragraph, or gives three choices in total, should not normally go beyond Level 3.
Q8Language analysis of two paragraphs · Standard · Paper 1 style · 15 marks

Read the text carefully, then answer the question. Paragraph numbers are shown in brackets.Text: The audition(1) The corridor outside the audition room was painted a sickly shade of green, and the chairs along the wall were so hard that every candidate sat on the very edge of them. Zara had been waiting for forty minutes. Her violin case lay across her knees, and she kept opening and closing the clasp without noticing she was doing it.(2) Through the closed door came the sound of the boy before her, playing the same piece she would play. His notes were clean and confident, each one landing exactly where it should, like stones dropped into a still pool. Zara's stomach tightened into a fist. She had practised for six months, two hours every evening, until her neighbours knew the piece as well as she did. Now it seemed to be evaporating from her memory note by note.(3) The door opened. "Zara Hussain?" A woman with a clipboard smiled briefly and held the door. Inside, three judges sat behind a long table, a glass of water in front of each of them, their faces polite and unreadable.(4) She lifted the violin to her chin. Her hands were trembling so much that the bow skittered on the first note, a thin squeak like a door hinge, and she saw one judge write something down. For a terrible moment the room tilted. Then she remembered her teacher's advice: play to one person, not to the room. She thought of her grandmother, who had sold a gold bangle to buy this violin, and closed her eyes. The next note was warm and full. The melody rose, steadied, and began to sing, filling the bare room like light pouring through a window.(5) When she finished, there was a short silence. The judge in the middle took off his glasses. "Thank you," he said. "You may go." It was only in the corridor, as the next candidate stood up, that Zara noticed he had been smiling.

  1. (a) Reread paragraphs 2 and 4.• Paragraph 2: Zara listening to the previous candidate.• Paragraph 4: Zara's performance.Explain how the writer uses language to convey meaning and to create effect in these paragraphs. Choose three examples of words or phrases from each paragraph to support your answer. Your choices should include the use of imagery. Write about 200 to 300 words. [15]
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  1. (a) Paragraph 2: The boy's notes are 'clean and confident', the alliteration stressing his assurance. They land 'like stones dropped into a still pool', a simile suggesting precision and calm, each note clear and complete, which intensifies Zara's anxiety by comparison. 'Stomach tightened into a fist' conveys tension physically, almost as if she is preparing for a fight. The detail that neighbours 'knew the piece as well as she did' shows the hours of practice. The piece 'evaporating from her memory note by note' is a metaphor for panic: her preparation seems to be disappearing into air.Paragraph 4: 'Trembling' and the bow that 'skittered' convey loss of control; the first note is 'a thin squeak like a door hinge', an ugly, comic simile that shows how badly things start. 'The room tilted' conveys dizziness and shock. The turning point comes through memory: the grandmother 'had sold a gold bangle', which reminds Zara of sacrifice and love. Then the music is 'warm and full', and the melody 'rose, steadied, and began to sing', a sequence of verbs showing growing confidence; personifying the melody as singing suggests it has come alive. 'Filling the bare room like light pouring through a window' makes the sound seem to transform the room, replacing fear with brightness.Overall, the writer moves Zara from paralysing nerves to triumph, so the judge's hidden smile feels earned.
    Suggested choices: P2: 'clean and confident'; 'like stones dropped into a still pool'; 'tightened into a fist'; 'evaporating from her memory note by note'. P4: 'trembling'; 'skittered'; 'a thin squeak like a door hinge'; 'the room tilted'; 'sold a gold bangle'; 'warm and full'; 'rose, steadied, and began to sing'; 'like light pouring through a window'. Level 5 (13–15): wide-ranging, precise and often original explanation of meaning and effect, with well-chosen images analysed in context and a clear sense of the writer's overall purpose; Level 4 (10–12): convincing explanation of a range of suitable choices, including imagery; Level 3 (7–9): some explanation of effects for mostly appropriate choices, but sometimes general; Level 2 (4–6): relevant choices with a basic attempt at meaning, effects thin or generalised ('it helps the reader imagine'); Level 1 (1–3): choices listed with little or no explanation, or misread; 0: nothing creditable. An answer that deals with only one paragraph, or gives three choices in total, should not normally go beyond Level 3.
Q9Language analysis of two paragraphs · Standard · Paper 1 style · 15 marks

Read the text carefully, then answer the question. Paragraph numbers are shown in brackets.Text: The house on Mall Road(1) I had not been back to the house for twenty years. After my grandmother died, it was locked and left while my uncles argued about who should have it, and somehow the argument outlived two of them. When I finally pushed open the gate, it groaned on its hinges as if it resented being woken.(2) The garden that I remembered as a jungle of roses and guavas had surrendered completely. Weeds stood waist-high, brittle and grey in the winter sun, and a creeper had wrapped itself around the verandah pillars like a python squeezing its prey. The fountain where my cousins and I had sailed paper boats was cracked and dry, its basin filled with dead leaves the colour of old tea.(3) The key turned stiffly. Inside, the air was cool and stale and smelled of dust and something sweeter, perhaps the ghost of my grandmother's rosewater. Sheets covered the furniture, so that the drawing room looked like a gathering of patient, shrouded figures waiting for someone to speak.(4) I went upstairs to the room where I used to sleep during the summer holidays. The window still had the crack shaped like a lightning bolt, and the afternoon light came through it in a thin golden blade that cut across the floor. Dust motes drifted in it, slow and dreamy, like tiny swimmers. On the wall, faint pencil marks recorded my height at seven, eight and nine years old, each line labelled in my grandmother's careful, looping hand. I put my palm flat against them. The plaster was cold, and for a moment my throat closed so tightly that I could not breathe.(5) Outside, a car horn sounded, and the spell broke. I took a photograph of the pencil marks, locked the door again and walked back down the path through the whispering weeds, knowing that I would not come back.

  1. (a) Reread paragraphs 2 and 4.• Paragraph 2: the neglected garden.• Paragraph 4: the narrator's old bedroom.Explain how the writer uses language to convey meaning and to create effect in these paragraphs. Choose three examples of words or phrases from each paragraph to support your answer. Your choices should include the use of imagery. Write about 200 to 300 words. [15]
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  1. (a) Paragraph 2: The garden 'had surrendered completely', a military metaphor suggesting it has lost a long battle against neglect. Weeds 'brittle and grey' convey lifelessness. The creeper wrapped round the pillars 'like a python squeezing its prey' is a menacing simile: nature is slowly strangling the house, suggesting decay and threat. The cracked, dry fountain contrasts with the memory of paper boats, emphasising lost childhood. Leaves 'the colour of old tea' is a domestic, nostalgic image that also suggests staleness.Paragraph 4: The crack 'shaped like a lightning bolt' is a precise remembered detail, showing how little has changed. The light comes through 'in a thin golden blade that cut across the floor', a metaphor that makes the light beautiful but also sharp, hinting at the pain of memory. Dust motes 'like tiny swimmers' are gentle and dreamy, slowing time. The pencil marks in 'careful, looping hand' bring the grandmother vividly back through her handwriting. 'Put my palm flat against them' is a tender gesture, as if touching her. 'My throat closed so tightly that I could not breathe' conveys overwhelming grief physically.Overall, the writer contrasts decay with precious memories, creating a mood of loss and quiet farewell.
    Suggested choices: P2: 'had surrendered completely'; 'brittle and grey'; 'like a python squeezing its prey'; 'cracked and dry'; 'the colour of old tea'. P4: 'shaped like a lightning bolt'; 'thin golden blade that cut across the floor'; 'like tiny swimmers'; 'careful, looping hand'; 'put my palm flat against them'; 'my throat closed so tightly'. Level 5 (13–15): wide-ranging, precise and often original explanation of meaning and effect, with well-chosen images analysed in context and a clear sense of the writer's overall purpose; Level 4 (10–12): convincing explanation of a range of suitable choices, including imagery; Level 3 (7–9): some explanation of effects for mostly appropriate choices, but sometimes general; Level 2 (4–6): relevant choices with a basic attempt at meaning, effects thin or generalised ('it helps the reader imagine'); Level 1 (1–3): choices listed with little or no explanation, or misread; 0: nothing creditable. An answer that deals with only one paragraph, or gives three choices in total, should not normally go beyond Level 3.
Q10Language analysis of two paragraphs · Standard · Paper 1 style · 15 marks

Read the text carefully, then answer the question. Paragraph numbers are shown in brackets.Text: The dry river(1) For as long as Imran could remember, the river below his village had been the centre of every summer. Boys swam there, women washed clothes on the flat stones, and in the afternoons he drove the family's three buffaloes down to wallow in the shallows until only their noses and curved horns showed above the water.(2) That June, the river did not come. Week after week the heat pressed down on the plain like a heavy hand. The sky was white rather than blue, and the sun hung in it like a hot coin. Where the water should have been, there was only a wide bed of cracked mud, split into a crazy pattern of plates that curled at the edges like old paper. The reeds along the bank had turned brittle and brown, and they rattled in the hot wind like dry bones.(3) The buffaloes suffered most. They stood in the shade of the neem tree with their heads low, panting, and refused to eat. Imran's father poured buckets of water from the well over their backs each morning, but the well too was getting lower, and the water came up cloudy.(4) One afternoon Imran walked the buffaloes three kilometres downstream, where an old man had told him a pool still remained beneath the railway bridge. The track was white with dust that rose in choking clouds around the animals' hooves. Sweat stung his eyes. When at last he saw the pool, it was a shrunken brown puddle, its edges trampled into thick mud by goats and cattle from five villages. The buffaloes lumbered into it with groans of pleasure, and Imran sat on the bank, watching the water shrink a little more with every hour.(5) That evening the radio reported that the rains were expected in ten days. His father switched it off without comment and went out to check the well again.

  1. (a) Reread paragraphs 2 and 4.• Paragraph 2: the drought and the empty riverbed.• Paragraph 4: Imran's walk to the last pool.Explain how the writer uses language to convey meaning and to create effect in these paragraphs. Choose three examples of words or phrases from each paragraph to support your answer. Your choices should include the use of imagery. Write about 200 to 300 words. [15]
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  1. (a) Paragraph 2: 'The river did not come' is short and stark, as if the river had broken a promise. Heat 'pressed down on the plain like a heavy hand' personifies it as oppressive and crushing. The sky 'white rather than blue' and the sun 'like a hot coin' create a harsh, bleached picture. The mud is 'split into a crazy pattern of plates that curled at the edges like old paper', a precise image of dryness and age, with 'crazy' suggesting disorder. The reeds that 'rattled in the hot wind like dry bones' is a deathly simile suggesting that the land itself is dying.Paragraph 4: The track is 'white with dust that rose in choking clouds', emphasising the suffocating conditions. 'Sweat stung his eyes' makes the reader feel his discomfort. The pool is a 'shrunken brown puddle', the adjectives destroying the hope built up by the old man's words. Its edges 'trampled into thick mud by … five villages' conveys how many depend on so little water. The buffaloes 'lumbered … with groans of pleasure', a moment of relief, but Imran watches 'the water shrink a little more with every hour', ending on a note of slow, inevitable loss.Overall, the writer uses images of death and decay to show the seriousness of the drought for the family.
    Suggested choices: P2: 'the river did not come'; 'pressed down … like a heavy hand'; 'like a hot coin'; 'crazy pattern of plates'; 'curled … like old paper'; 'rattled … like dry bones'. P4: 'choking clouds'; 'sweat stung his eyes'; 'shrunken brown puddle'; 'trampled into thick mud'; 'lumbered … with groans of pleasure'; 'shrink a little more with every hour'. Level 5 (13–15): wide-ranging, precise and often original explanation of meaning and effect, with well-chosen images analysed in context and a clear sense of the writer's overall purpose; Level 4 (10–12): convincing explanation of a range of suitable choices, including imagery; Level 3 (7–9): some explanation of effects for mostly appropriate choices, but sometimes general; Level 2 (4–6): relevant choices with a basic attempt at meaning, effects thin or generalised ('it helps the reader imagine'); Level 1 (1–3): choices listed with little or no explanation, or misread; 0: nothing creditable. An answer that deals with only one paragraph, or gives three choices in total, should not normally go beyond Level 3.
Q11Language analysis of two paragraphs · Standard · Paper 1 style · 15 marks

Read the text carefully, then answer the question. Paragraph numbers are shown in brackets.Text: The night the ground moved(1) My cousin Hina's wedding was held in a marquee in the garden of her parents' house in Quetta. By ten at night, four hundred guests were seated at round tables beneath strings of fairy lights, and the air was warm with the smell of roasting meat and the sound of a band that played slightly too loud.(2) The marquee was a palace of colour. Its walls were draped in silk of deep red and gold, and chandeliers of fake crystal hung from the roof, scattering little rainbows across the faces below. Hina sat on a raised stage, glittering like a jewel box in her heavy embroidered dress, so still and serious that she might have been a painting. Children chased each other between the tables, and the aunties' laughter rose in bursts like flocks of startled pigeons.(3) I was carrying a plate of sweets to my grandmother when the first tremor came. It was not dramatic: a low rumble, almost below hearing, and a faint shiver in the floor, as if a heavy lorry were passing in the street.(4) Then the chandeliers began to sway. Slowly at first, then wildly, like pendulums gone mad, and the fairy lights flickered and danced. Glasses chattered against one another on the tables. A great groan seemed to rise out of the earth itself, deep and animal, and the ground beneath my feet rolled like the deck of a ship. For a second nobody moved. Then four hundred chairs scraped back at once, and the music stopped in the middle of a note. My grandmother caught hold of my wrist with a grip like iron and steered me calmly towards the open side of the marquee.(5) It lasted less than a minute. Out on the lawn, under the cold stars, we counted heads and found everyone safe. After an hour, when no more tremors came, the band picked up their instruments again, and Hina, still in her glittering dress, laughed for the first time all evening.

  1. (a) Reread paragraphs 2 and 4.• Paragraph 2: the wedding marquee.• Paragraph 4: the earthquake.Explain how the writer uses language to convey meaning and to create effect in these paragraphs. Choose three examples of words or phrases from each paragraph to support your answer. Your choices should include the use of imagery. Write about 200 to 300 words. [15]
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  1. (a) Paragraph 2: The marquee is 'a palace of colour', a metaphor suggesting grandeur and celebration. Chandeliers 'scattering little rainbows' create a magical, joyful mood. Hina is 'glittering like a jewel box', a simile suggesting she is precious and richly decorated, but also perhaps stiff and enclosed; 'so still and serious that she might have been a painting' hints at her nerves. The aunties' laughter rising 'like flocks of startled pigeons' is lively and comic, though 'startled' quietly foreshadows the alarm to come.Paragraph 4: The chandeliers sway 'like pendulums gone mad', turning a symbol of celebration into one of danger and loss of control. Lights that 'flickered and danced' and glasses that 'chattered' are personified, as if the objects themselves are frightened. 'A great groan seemed to rise out of the earth itself, deep and animal' makes the earthquake a living creature, terrifying and primitive. The ground 'rolled like the deck of a ship' conveys instability. 'For a second nobody moved' creates a moment of frozen shock before 'four hundred chairs scraped back at once', showing sudden collective panic. The music stopping 'in the middle of a note' marks the abrupt end of celebration, while the grandmother's 'grip like iron' and calm steering show strength.Overall, the writer contrasts celebration and terror so that the relief and Hina's laughter at the end feel warm.
    Suggested choices: P2: 'a palace of colour'; 'scattering little rainbows'; 'glittering like a jewel box'; 'might have been a painting'; 'like flocks of startled pigeons'. P4: 'like pendulums gone mad'; 'flickered and danced'; 'glasses chattered'; 'a great groan … deep and animal'; 'rolled like the deck of a ship'; 'four hundred chairs scraped back at once'; 'in the middle of a note'; 'a grip like iron'. Level 5 (13–15): wide-ranging, precise and often original explanation of meaning and effect, with well-chosen images analysed in context and a clear sense of the writer's overall purpose; Level 4 (10–12): convincing explanation of a range of suitable choices, including imagery; Level 3 (7–9): some explanation of effects for mostly appropriate choices, but sometimes general; Level 2 (4–6): relevant choices with a basic attempt at meaning, effects thin or generalised ('it helps the reader imagine'); Level 1 (1–3): choices listed with little or no explanation, or misread; 0: nothing creditable. An answer that deals with only one paragraph, or gives three choices in total, should not normally go beyond Level 3.
Q12Language analysis of two paragraphs · Challenge · Paper 1 style · 15 marks

Read the text carefully, then answer the question. Paragraph numbers are shown in brackets.Text: First night at sea(1) Bilal was fifteen when his uncle finally agreed to take him out on the boat. They left Gwadar harbour as the sun was setting, the engine coughing and then settling into a steady growl, and Bilal stood at the bow feeling the spray on his face and trying to look as though he did this every day.(2) The sea was calm at first, a vast sheet of beaten copper that turned purple, then black, as the light drained away. The coast shrank behind them to a string of yellow beads. Bilal had never known darkness like it: the stars were not scattered but poured across the sky like spilled sugar, and the wake behind the boat glittered with tiny sparks of green light.(3) Around midnight they put out the nets. His uncle and the two crewmen worked without talking, their hands moving as if they belonged to one body, while Bilal fumbled with ropes that were wet, heavy and seemed determined to tangle. His palms burned. Nobody shouted at him, which somehow made it worse.(4) Then the wind changed. It came from nowhere, slapping the boat sideways, and the sea, so obedient an hour before, began to heave and snarl. Waves rose like dark hills and broke over the side, drenching him. The deck tilted beneath his feet and his stomach lurched with it. He clung to the mast, sick and terrified, certain the boat would roll over and swallow them all. Through the roar he heard his uncle laughing. "This is nothing!" he shouted. "This is the sea saying hello."(5) By dawn the wind had dropped, and the nets came up silver and thrashing with fish. Bilal hauled with the others until his arms shook. When the harbour appeared again, low and pale on the horizon, he realised he was no longer pretending.

  1. (a) Reread paragraphs 2 and 4.• Paragraph 2: the calm sea and night sky early in the voyage.• Paragraph 4: the sudden storm.Explain how the writer uses language to convey meaning and to create effect in these paragraphs. Choose three examples of words or phrases from each paragraph to support your answer. Your choices should include the use of imagery. Write about 200 to 300 words. [15]
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  1. (a) Paragraph 2: The calm sea is 'a vast sheet of beaten copper', a metaphor that conveys a smooth, shining, reddish surface at sunset and suggests something solid and dependable; the change to 'purple, then black' as the light 'drained away' suggests the day emptying out and hints at something ominous. The coast becomes 'a string of yellow beads', showing how small and distant safety has become. The stars 'poured across the sky like spilled sugar' is a homely simile that conveys their sheer number and the boy's wonder, and the wake 'glittered with tiny sparks of green light' creates a magical, almost enchanted mood. Bilal is awed and peaceful.Paragraph 4: 'From nowhere' conveys suddenness. The wind 'slapping' the boat personifies it as a bully. The sea, 'so obedient an hour before', now 'began to heave and snarl': it is personified as a tame animal turning savage, so the reader feels the threat as alive and hostile. 'Waves rose like dark hills' conveys their enormous size and weight. His stomach 'lurched' with the deck, linking his fear to the movement physically. 'Certain the boat would roll over and swallow them' shows his terror; ironically, the uncle's 'laughing' and 'This is the sea saying hello' reveal how inexperienced Bilal still is.Overall, the contrast between beauty and violence shows the sea's double nature and prepares for Bilal's growth.
    Suggested choices: P2: 'vast sheet of beaten copper'; 'light drained away'; 'string of yellow beads'; 'poured across the sky like spilled sugar'; 'glittered with tiny sparks of green light'. P4: 'came from nowhere'; 'slapping'; 'so obedient … heave and snarl'; 'rose like dark hills'; 'drenching'; 'stomach lurched'; 'swallow them all'; 'the sea saying hello'. Level 5 (13–15): wide-ranging, precise and often original explanation of meaning and effect, with well-chosen images analysed in context and a clear sense of the writer's overall purpose; Level 4 (10–12): convincing explanation of a range of suitable choices, including imagery; Level 3 (7–9): some explanation of effects for mostly appropriate choices, but sometimes general; Level 2 (4–6): relevant choices with a basic attempt at meaning, effects thin or generalised ('it helps the reader imagine'); Level 1 (1–3): choices listed with little or no explanation, or misread; 0: nothing creditable. An answer that deals with only one paragraph, or gives three choices in total, should not normally go beyond Level 3.
Q13Language analysis of two paragraphs · Challenge · Paper 1 style · 15 marks

Read the text carefully, then answer the question. Paragraph numbers are shown in brackets.Text: Frost in the orchard(1) Every April, Bibi Gul's apricot trees burst into flower all at once, and for a week the terraced orchard above the village looked as though a cloud had come down to rest on the hillside. She was seventy-eight and had planted half the trees herself, carrying the saplings up from the river in a basket on her back.(2) That year the blossom was the best anyone could remember. The branches were heavy with it, pale pink and white, and when the wind blew, petals drifted down onto the stone walls like warm snow. Bees hummed in the trees from dawn until dusk, a low contented sound like a kettle about to boil, and the whole slope smelled faintly of honey and almonds.(3) Then the radio warned of a frost. Bibi Gul listened in silence, her hands folded in her lap, and then she sent her grandsons to collect every old tyre, dry branch and sack of sawdust they could find.(4) By nightfall the sky was hard and clear, and the cold came down from the glacier like a thief. Stars glittered above the peaks, sharp as broken glass. The family lit small smoky fires between the rows of trees and kept them burning hour after hour, feeding them, coughing in the bitter smoke. Bibi Gul moved from fire to fire wrapped in her shawl, a small bent shape in the orange glow, touching the trunks of the trees as if she were comforting children. Her breath hung in front of her face like a ghost. Nobody slept.(5) At sunrise the grass was white and stiff, crunching underfoot. Some of the lower trees had lost their flowers, the petals brown and curled. But on the higher terraces, where the smoke had lain thickest, the blossom had survived. Bibi Gul stood among the branches for a long time, saying nothing at all.

  1. (a) Reread paragraphs 2 and 4.• Paragraph 2: the orchard in full blossom.• Paragraph 4: the night of the frost.Explain how the writer uses language to convey meaning and to create effect in these paragraphs. Choose three examples of words or phrases from each paragraph to support your answer. Your choices should include the use of imagery. Write about 200 to 300 words. [15]
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  1. (a) Paragraph 2: 'The branches were heavy with it' suggests abundance and promise of a rich harvest. Petals drifting 'like warm snow' is a paradox: snow is cold, but 'warm' makes the image gentle and beautiful while quietly foreshadowing the real frost to come. The bees' hum, 'a low contented sound like a kettle about to boil', is homely and peaceful, suggesting comfort and contentment, though 'about to boil' may hint at a coming change. The smell of 'honey and almonds' appeals to the senses and creates a sweet, idyllic mood.Paragraph 4: The sky is 'hard and clear', the adjective making it seem cruel. 'The cold came down from the glacier like a thief' personifies the frost as a criminal creeping in at night to steal the harvest. Stars 'sharp as broken glass' transform the usual beauty of stars into something dangerous. The family 'coughing in the bitter smoke' shows the physical cost of their effort. Bibi Gul is 'a small bent shape in the orange glow', stressing her age and frailty, yet she touches the trunks 'as if she were comforting children', revealing how deeply she loves the trees she planted. Her breath 'like a ghost' conveys the cold and perhaps her fear of loss. 'Nobody slept' is short and emphatic.Overall, the contrast between the idyllic blossom and the threatening night makes the partial survival in paragraph 5 deeply moving.
    Suggested choices: P2: 'heavy with it'; 'like warm snow'; 'like a kettle about to boil'; 'honey and almonds'; 'petals drifted down onto the stone walls'. P4: 'hard and clear'; 'like a thief'; 'sharp as broken glass'; 'coughing in the bitter smoke'; 'small bent shape in the orange glow'; 'as if she were comforting children'; 'like a ghost'; 'Nobody slept'. Level 5 (13–15): wide-ranging, precise and often original explanation of meaning and effect, with well-chosen images analysed in context and a clear sense of the writer's overall purpose; Level 4 (10–12): convincing explanation of a range of suitable choices, including imagery; Level 3 (7–9): some explanation of effects for mostly appropriate choices, but sometimes general; Level 2 (4–6): relevant choices with a basic attempt at meaning, effects thin or generalised ('it helps the reader imagine'); Level 1 (1–3): choices listed with little or no explanation, or misread; 0: nothing creditable. An answer that deals with only one paragraph, or gives three choices in total, should not normally go beyond Level 3.
Q14Language analysis of two paragraphs · Challenge · Paper 1 style · 15 marks

Read the text carefully, then answer the question. Paragraph numbers are shown in brackets.Text: The wall of sand(1) We had left the fort in the Cholistan desert just after noon, three of us in an old jeep, heading for a village where my father had arranged to buy two camels. Our driver, Jumma, had made the journey a hundred times and drove with one hand on the wheel, humming.(2) The first sign was a change in the light. The sky, which had been a hard, dazzling blue, took on a yellowish tinge, like an old photograph. The wind dropped completely, and an eerie stillness settled over the dunes. Jumma stopped humming. On the horizon a dark smudge appeared, and it grew, rolling towards us like a great brown wave, swallowing the low hills one by one.(3) "Windows up," said Jumma. "Scarves on." He swung the jeep round so that its back faced the approaching storm and switched off the engine.(4) Then it hit us. The light went out as though someone had switched off the sun, and the jeep rocked on its springs. Sand screamed against the metal and the windows, millions of tiny needles hunting for a way in. It found one: a fine dust crept through every crack, settling on our clothes, our eyelashes, our tongues, gritty as ground glass between our teeth. The world outside was a roaring orange darkness. I pressed my scarf over my mouth and counted my breaths, and every time the wind gave a fresh howl, the jeep shuddered like a frightened animal.(5) After an hour, which felt like a day, the noise faded to a whisper. We opened the doors onto a landscape we did not recognise. The track had vanished, and new dunes lay smooth and innocent where none had been before. Jumma climbed onto the roof, studied the sun for a long time, and then started the engine as calmly as if nothing had happened.

  1. (a) Reread paragraphs 2 and 4.• Paragraph 2: the signs that a storm is coming.• Paragraph 4: the storm hitting the jeep.Explain how the writer uses language to convey meaning and to create effect in these paragraphs. Choose three examples of words or phrases from each paragraph to support your answer. Your choices should include the use of imagery. Write about 200 to 300 words. [15]
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  1. (a) Paragraph 2: The sky changes from 'hard, dazzling blue' to 'a yellowish tinge, like an old photograph', a simile that makes the world seem faded and unreal, as if time has stopped. 'An eerie stillness settled' creates suspense through absence of sound and movement. Jumma's silence, 'stopped humming', tells the reader more than any words that something is wrong. The storm is 'a dark smudge' that grows, 'rolling towards us like a great brown wave', a simile that brings the sea into the desert that conveys enormous size and unstoppable force, and 'swallowing the low hills one by one' personifies it as a monster.Paragraph 4: 'The light went out as though someone had switched off the sun' conveys sudden total darkness. Sand 'screamed' is personification suggesting rage and pain. 'Millions of tiny needles hunting for a way in' makes the grains seem deliberate and predatory. The dust that 'crept through every crack' and is 'gritty as ground glass between our teeth' appeals to touch and taste and makes the reader almost feel it. 'A roaring orange darkness' is a paradox of colour and dark that captures the strange light. The jeep 'shuddered like a frightened animal', sharing the narrator's fear.Overall, the writer turns a natural event into a living attacker, then contrasts it with the calm, transformed landscape afterwards.
    Suggested choices: P2: 'like an old photograph'; 'eerie stillness settled'; 'stopped humming'; 'rolling towards us like a great brown wave'; 'swallowing the low hills one by one'. P4: 'as though someone had switched off the sun'; 'screamed'; 'tiny needles hunting for a way in'; 'crept through every crack'; 'gritty as ground glass'; 'roaring orange darkness'; 'shuddered like a frightened animal'. Level 5 (13–15): wide-ranging, precise and often original explanation of meaning and effect, with well-chosen images analysed in context and a clear sense of the writer's overall purpose; Level 4 (10–12): convincing explanation of a range of suitable choices, including imagery; Level 3 (7–9): some explanation of effects for mostly appropriate choices, but sometimes general; Level 2 (4–6): relevant choices with a basic attempt at meaning, effects thin or generalised ('it helps the reader imagine'); Level 1 (1–3): choices listed with little or no explanation, or misread; 0: nothing creditable. An answer that deals with only one paragraph, or gives three choices in total, should not normally go beyond Level 3.
Q15Language analysis of two paragraphs · Challenge · Paper 1 style · 15 marks

Read the text carefully, then answer the question. Paragraph numbers are shown in brackets.Text: Lights out(1) The power went off at ten past nine, three days before my chemistry exam. One moment I was copying equations into my notebook beneath a bright desk lamp; the next, the whole apartment block plunged into darkness, and a groan rose from every floor at once, as if the building itself were complaining.(2) Then came the silence. The ceiling fan slowed, wobbled and stopped. The fridge shuddered and fell quiet. Without the hum of machines, I could hear things I never normally noticed: a baby crying two floors up, a motorbike far away, the tick of the clock in the hallway. The heat crept in almost immediately, thick and damp, wrapping itself around me like a wet blanket. Through the window, the city had become a sea of black, with only a few scattered generators glowing like islands.(3) My mother found candles in the kitchen drawer and lit two, setting them on saucers. My little brother was delighted and began making shadow animals on the wall. My father opened every window and announced that we would all sleep on the roof.(4) I tried to keep studying by candlelight. The flame bent and shivered each time someone walked past, and the words on the page swam in and out of the trembling yellow light like fish rising to the surface of a pond. Sweat dripped from my chin onto the paper and spread into small grey blots. Every few minutes a moth blundered into the flame and spun away, scorched and confused, and I felt exactly the same way. Organic chemistry had never seemed so cruel.(5) Eventually I gave up and climbed to the roof. The neighbours were already there with mats and water bottles. Someone had a radio. Above us, freed from the glare of the city, the stars were out, more of them than I had ever seen, and for once I did not think about the exam at all.

  1. (a) Reread paragraphs 2 and 4.• Paragraph 2: the silence and heat after the power cut.• Paragraph 4: the narrator studying by candlelight.Explain how the writer uses language to convey meaning and to create effect in these paragraphs. Choose three examples of words or phrases from each paragraph to support your answer. Your choices should include the use of imagery. Write about 200 to 300 words. [15]
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  1. (a) Paragraph 2: 'Then came the silence' introduces a sudden change; the fan that 'slowed, wobbled and stopped' uses three verbs to slow the pace, mimicking the machine dying. The fridge that 'shuddered and fell quiet' is personified like a living thing. The list of newly noticed sounds (a baby, a motorbike, the clock) shows how the silence sharpens the senses. The heat 'wrapping itself around me like a wet blanket' makes it heavy and suffocating. The city as 'a sea of black' with generators 'like islands' is an extended metaphor showing isolation and the scale of the cut.Paragraph 4: The flame 'bent and shivered', personified as fragile and nervous, reflects the narrator's mood. Words 'swam in and out of the trembling yellow light like fish rising to the surface of a pond' conveys tiredness and difficulty reading, as if the text is alive and slippery. Sweat spreading into 'small grey blots' shows physical discomfort damaging the work. The moth that 'blundered into the flame and spun away, scorched and confused' becomes a symbol of the narrator, which the narrator states directly: 'I felt exactly the same way'. 'Organic chemistry had never seemed so cruel' adds wry humour.Overall, the writer combines discomfort and humour to show stress before an exam, which is released in the peaceful rooftop ending.
    Suggested choices: P2: 'slowed, wobbled and stopped'; 'shuddered and fell quiet'; list of sounds; 'like a wet blanket'; 'a sea of black'; 'glowing like islands'. P4: 'bent and shivered'; 'swam … like fish rising to the surface'; 'small grey blots'; 'blundered into the flame … scorched and confused'; 'I felt exactly the same way'; 'never seemed so cruel'. Level 5 (13–15): wide-ranging, precise and often original explanation of meaning and effect, with well-chosen images analysed in context and a clear sense of the writer's overall purpose; Level 4 (10–12): convincing explanation of a range of suitable choices, including imagery; Level 3 (7–9): some explanation of effects for mostly appropriate choices, but sometimes general; Level 2 (4–6): relevant choices with a basic attempt at meaning, effects thin or generalised ('it helps the reader imagine'); Level 1 (1–3): choices listed with little or no explanation, or misread; 0: nothing creditable. An answer that deals with only one paragraph, or gives three choices in total, should not normally go beyond Level 3.
Q16Language analysis of two paragraphs · Challenge · Paper 1 style · 15 marks

Read the text carefully, then answer the question. Paragraph numbers are shown in brackets.Text: Tracks in the snow(1) Rangers in the high valleys of the north spend whole winters searching for an animal that most of them have seen only a handful of times. Karim had been a ranger for nine years and had seen a snow leopard just twice, both times for less than a minute.(2) This morning, at dawn, he found tracks. They crossed the path below the ridge in a neat, deliberate line, each print as wide as his palm, pressed cleanly into the fresh snow like a seal stamped in wax. The tail had left a faint brushing mark beside them. They were so new that the edges were still sharp and powdery, untouched by the wind. Karim's heart began to thump.(3) He followed them slowly, keeping below the skyline, his breath clouding in front of him. The tracks led up across a slope of loose scree, past a cluster of juniper bushes, and towards a band of grey cliffs where the leopard might rest during the day.(4) At the foot of the cliffs he stopped and raised his binoculars. For a long time he saw only rock: grey, black, streaked with white, a jumble of shapes in which anything could hide. Then one of the shapes moved. A long, thick tail curled lazily, and the rock became a cat, smoky grey and dappled with dark rosettes, so perfectly matched to the stone that it seemed to have been carved from it. It lifted its head and looked straight at him across four hundred metres of air, its pale eyes calm and utterly unafraid. The valley went completely silent; even the wind seemed to stop and watch.(5) Then, in one fluid movement, the leopard rose, turned and poured itself over the ridge like smoke. Karim lowered his binoculars. His hands, he noticed, were shaking, and not because of the cold.

  1. (a) Reread paragraphs 2 and 4.• Paragraph 2: the leopard's tracks.• Paragraph 4: Karim seeing the snow leopard.Explain how the writer uses language to convey meaning and to create effect in these paragraphs. Choose three examples of words or phrases from each paragraph to support your answer. Your choices should include the use of imagery. Write about 200 to 300 words. [15]
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  1. (a) Paragraph 2: The tracks form 'a neat, deliberate line', suggesting a confident, purposeful animal. Each print is 'pressed cleanly into the fresh snow like a seal stamped in wax', a simile implying something official and precious, as if the leopard has signed its name; it also stresses how clear and new the prints are. The 'faint brushing mark' of the tail adds delicate detail. 'Edges were still sharp and powdery' builds tension: the animal is very close. 'Karim's heart began to thump' shows excitement physically.Paragraph 4: The list 'grey, black, streaked with white' and 'a jumble of shapes' convey how hard it is to see anything. 'Then one of the shapes moved' is a short, dramatic sentence. 'The rock became a cat' is a metaphor showing the moment of recognition, and 'smoky grey' and 'so perfectly matched to the stone that it seemed to have been carved from it' convey its perfect camouflage and almost statue-like beauty. Its eyes 'calm and utterly unafraid' reverse expectations: it is the human who is nervous. 'The valley went completely silent; even the wind seemed to stop and watch' personifies nature, creating a sense of awe and reverence.Overall, the writer builds suspense slowly to a moment of wonder, made rarer by the opening detail that Karim had seen the animal only twice.
    Suggested choices: P2: 'neat, deliberate line'; 'like a seal stamped in wax'; 'faint brushing mark'; 'still sharp and powdery'; 'heart began to thump'. P4: 'a jumble of shapes'; 'one of the shapes moved'; 'the rock became a cat'; 'smoky grey'; 'carved from it'; 'calm and utterly unafraid'; 'even the wind seemed to stop and watch'. Level 5 (13–15): wide-ranging, precise and often original explanation of meaning and effect, with well-chosen images analysed in context and a clear sense of the writer's overall purpose; Level 4 (10–12): convincing explanation of a range of suitable choices, including imagery; Level 3 (7–9): some explanation of effects for mostly appropriate choices, but sometimes general; Level 2 (4–6): relevant choices with a basic attempt at meaning, effects thin or generalised ('it helps the reader imagine'); Level 1 (1–3): choices listed with little or no explanation, or misread; 0: nothing creditable. An answer that deals with only one paragraph, or gives three choices in total, should not normally go beyond Level 3.
Q17Language analysis of two paragraphs · Challenge · Paper 1 style · 15 marks

Read the text carefully, then answer the question. Paragraph numbers are shown in brackets.Text: The crossing(1) The ferry to the island was supposed to take forty minutes. It was an old boat, its blue paint blistered by years of salt, and on that grey October afternoon it carried about thirty passengers, a few crates of vegetables and a goat tied to the rail.(2) For the first quarter of an hour the sea was merely restless. Long, oily swells lifted the ferry and set it down again, lazily, like a giant breathing in its sleep. Gulls hung motionless above the stern, and the island ahead was a low smudge of green beneath a sky the colour of wet cement. Most passengers sat inside, dozing or scrolling on their phones; only a few of us stayed on deck, where the wind tasted of salt and diesel.(3) Then the captain changed course, and the engine note deepened. A crewman came round closing the windows and handing out life jackets without explanation. Nobody asked questions, but everybody stopped talking.(4) The storm arrived in a single stroke. Rain lashed across the deck in stinging sheets, and the sea rose up in dark, marbled walls that slammed against the hull with the force of a battering ram. The ferry staggered, climbed each wave as if it were a mountain, hung for a terrible moment at the top and then plunged into the trough with a crash that rattled every bolt. Spray burst over the bow like broken glass. Inside the cabin a child was screaming, crates slid across the floor, and the goat bleated piteously in the rain. I clung to a pillar, my knuckles white, my stomach somewhere in my throat.(5) It lasted twenty minutes. Then, as suddenly as it had begun, it was over; the clouds tore open, and a shaft of sunlight fell across the harbour as we limped in. On the quay, the goat's owner untied it, patted its soaked head and walked away as though nothing at all had happened.

  1. (a) Reread paragraphs 2 and 4.• Paragraph 2: the sea early in the crossing.• Paragraph 4: the storm.Explain how the writer uses language to convey meaning and to create effect in these paragraphs. Choose three examples of words or phrases from each paragraph to support your answer. Your choices should include the use of imagery. Write about 200 to 300 words. [15]
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  1. (a) Paragraph 2: The sea is 'merely restless', suggesting mild unease rather than danger. The swells are 'long, oily', an unpleasant image of a thick, slow surface, and they lift the ferry 'lazily, like a giant breathing in its sleep', a simile that makes the sea seem calm but enormous and potentially dangerous if it wakes. Gulls 'hung motionless' create stillness. The sky 'the colour of wet cement' is dull, heavy and grey, hinting at the coming storm. The wind that 'tasted of salt and diesel' adds sensory realism.Paragraph 4: 'In a single stroke' shows the suddenness, perhaps suggesting a blow. Rain 'lashed … in stinging sheets', the verb implying a whip. The sea 'rose up in dark, marbled walls' that 'slammed … with the force of a battering ram', a metaphor of siege warfare that makes the sea an attacking army. The ferry 'staggered', personified as a wounded or drunken person, climbing each wave 'as if it were a mountain' and hanging 'for a terrible moment' before it 'plunged'; the long sentence mimics the rise and fall. Spray 'like broken glass' suggests sharpness and danger. The list of the screaming child, sliding crates and bleating goat conveys chaos, and 'my stomach somewhere in my throat' expresses fear and nausea.Overall, the writer shows how quickly a calm sea becomes violent, and the goat owner's calm at the end adds humour and relief.
    Suggested choices: P2: 'merely restless'; 'long, oily swells'; 'like a giant breathing in its sleep'; 'hung motionless'; 'the colour of wet cement'. P4: 'in a single stroke'; 'lashed … stinging sheets'; 'dark, marbled walls'; 'force of a battering ram'; 'staggered'; 'as if it were a mountain'; 'hung for a terrible moment … plunged'; 'like broken glass'; 'stomach somewhere in my throat'. Level 5 (13–15): wide-ranging, precise and often original explanation of meaning and effect, with well-chosen images analysed in context and a clear sense of the writer's overall purpose; Level 4 (10–12): convincing explanation of a range of suitable choices, including imagery; Level 3 (7–9): some explanation of effects for mostly appropriate choices, but sometimes general; Level 2 (4–6): relevant choices with a basic attempt at meaning, effects thin or generalised ('it helps the reader imagine'); Level 1 (1–3): choices listed with little or no explanation, or misread; 0: nothing creditable. An answer that deals with only one paragraph, or gives three choices in total, should not normally go beyond Level 3.
Q18Identifying equivalent words or phrases · Core · Paper 1 style · 4 marks

Read the text carefully, then answer the question. Paragraph numbers are shown in brackets.Text: The dog in the rain(1) Faisal saw the dog on his way home from school, huddled under a parked car on the corner of his street. It was small and brown, with one ear that stood up and one that flopped, and it was shivering so violently that its whole body seemed to vibrate. Rain hammered on the car roof above it.(2) He crouched down. The dog stared at him with wide, wary eyes and drew back further into the shadows, pressing its belly against the wet road. Faisal held out the last piece of his lunchtime sandwich. For a long time nothing happened. Then, inch by inch, the dog crept forward, sniffed the bread and snatched it from his fingers before retreating again, as though it expected to be punished.(3) It followed him home at a distance, stopping whenever he looked round, darting behind lampposts and bins. At his gate it hesitated, one paw raised, trembling. Faisal's mother came out with an umbrella, took one look and sighed. "Only until it stops raining," she said, which Faisal knew from experience meant something quite different.(4) They dried it with an old towel in the kitchen. Underneath the mud it was the colour of toffee, with a white patch on its chest, and it was much thinner than it had looked. It ate a bowl of rice and chicken so fast that it almost choked, then curled up beside the warm stove and fell asleep instantly, its paws twitching as it dreamed.(5) The next day, Faisal put up notices on lampposts. Nobody called. By the end of the week the dog had a name, Biscuit, a collar and a firm opinion about which chair belonged to him.

  1. (a) Identify a word or phrase from the text which suggests the same idea as the words given: "suspicious and cautious" (paragraph 2). [1]
  2. (b) Identify a word or phrase from the text which suggests the same idea as the words given: "very gradually" (paragraph 2). [1]
  3. (c) Identify a word or phrase from the text which suggests the same idea as the words given: "grabbed quickly" (paragraph 2). [1]
  4. (d) Identify a word or phrase from the text which suggests the same idea as the words given: "moving quickly to hide" (paragraph 3). [1]
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  1. (a) wary
    1 mark for the exact word/phrase from the text.
  2. (b) inch by inch
    1 mark for the exact word/phrase from the text.
  3. (c) snatched
    1 mark for the exact word/phrase from the text.
  4. (d) darting
    1 mark for the exact word/phrase from the text.
Q19Identifying equivalent words or phrases · Core · Paper 1 style · 4 marks

Read the text carefully, then answer the question. Paragraph numbers are shown in brackets.Text: The last over(1) Six balls. Eleven runs to defend. The inter-school final had come down to this, and the captain, after a long moment of staring at the ground, tossed the ball to me.(2) I was not our best bowler. I was not even our second-best. But the others had finished their overs, and so I stood at the top of my run-up with the ball in my hand and the whole ground looking at me. The stands, which held perhaps five hundred people, sounded like five thousand. The batsman was their captain, a tall boy who had already hit four sixes, and he tapped his bat on the crease with a confidence that made my knees feel hollow.(3) The first ball was too short, and he pulled it for four. Seven needed from five. The second was a dot ball; he swung and missed, and our wicketkeeper whooped. The third he pushed for a single, and the fourth was driven for two.(4) Four runs needed from two balls. I walked back to my mark slowly, trying to breathe. My hands were damp, and I wiped the ball on my trousers until the red leather left a pink stain. I could hear my heart over the crowd. I ran in, the ground blurring beside me, and bowled the fastest ball of my life, full and straight. The batsman swung hard. There was a crack, and the ball flew high, high, towards the long boundary, and every face in the ground turned to follow it.(5) Our fielder, a quiet boy named Usman who had dropped two catches earlier, was standing beneath it. He did not drop this one. I do not remember bowling the final ball, only that we won by two runs and that the team carried Usman, not me, off the field on their shoulders. That seemed exactly right.

  1. (a) Identify a word or phrase from the text which suggests the same idea as the words given: "threw lightly" (paragraph 1). [1]
  2. (b) Identify a word or phrase from the text which suggests the same idea as the words given: "empty and weak" (paragraph 2). [1]
  3. (c) Identify a word or phrase from the text which suggests the same idea as the words given: "shouted with delight" (paragraph 3). [1]
  4. (d) Identify a word or phrase from the text which suggests the same idea as the words given: "becoming unclear" (paragraph 4). [1]
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  1. (a) tossed
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  2. (b) hollow
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  3. (c) whooped
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  4. (d) blurring
    1 mark for the exact word/phrase from the text.
Q20Identifying equivalent words or phrases · Standard · Paper 1 style · 4 marks

Read the text carefully, then answer the question. Paragraph numbers are shown in brackets.Text: Lessons on the Shahrah-e-Faisal(1) My aunt Nargis decided to learn to drive at fifty-two, after my uncle announced that she would never manage it. She asked me to come along to her first lesson for moral support. I think she meant as a witness.(2) The instructor, a patient man named Mr Aslam, began in an empty car park. My aunt gripped the steering wheel at precisely ten and two o'clock and stared straight ahead as if the car might bite her. When she pressed the accelerator, the car leapt forward like a startled horse, and she stamped on the brake so hard that we all lurched against our seatbelts. "Gently," said Mr Aslam. "The car is not your enemy."(3) After two weeks she had mastered the car park. Then Mr Aslam took her onto a main road. Traffic in Karachi does not so much flow as boil: buses decorated like wedding cakes, rickshaws that dart into impossible gaps, motorbikes carrying whole families, donkey carts, and everyone sounding their horns at once.(4) My aunt drove at exactly forty kilometres an hour in the left lane, perspiring heavily. A bus overtook us with centimetres to spare, its conductor hanging from the door and shouting cheerfully. A rickshaw cut in front of us. My aunt muttered something I will not repeat, checked her mirror, indicated, and carried on. I realised, with surprise, that she was not frightened any more; she was furious, and it was making her concentrate.(5) Three months later she passed her test at the first attempt. The first journey she made alone was to my uncle's office, to collect him, and she drove him home without saying a single word, smiling all the way.

  1. (a) Identify a word or phrase from the text which suggests the same idea as the words given: "held very tightly" (paragraph 2). [1]
  2. (b) Identify a word or phrase from the text which suggests the same idea as the words given: "jumped forward suddenly" (paragraph 2). [1]
  3. (c) Identify a word or phrase from the text which suggests the same idea as the words given: "move quickly into" (paragraph 3). [1]
  4. (d) Identify a word or phrase from the text which suggests the same idea as the words given: "sweating" (paragraph 4). [1]
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  1. (a) gripped
    1 mark for the exact word/phrase from the text.
  2. (b) leapt forward
    1 mark for the exact word/phrase from the text. Also accept: leapt.
  3. (c) dart into
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  4. (d) perspiring
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Q21Identifying equivalent words or phrases · Standard · Paper 1 style · 4 marks

Read the text carefully, then answer the question. Paragraph numbers are shown in brackets.Text: Ward Seven(1) Grandmother had been in hospital for eleven days when my mother finally agreed that I could visit. I was fourteen, and I had not been inside a hospital since I was born.(2) Ward Seven was on the third floor, at the end of a long corridor that smelled of disinfectant and boiled vegetables. Trolleys rattled past pushed by nurses who moved quickly, rubber shoes squeaking on the polished floor. Machines beeped behind curtains. Everything was white or pale green, and the fluorescent lights made every face look tired and slightly unwell.(3) She was in the bed by the window. I almost did not recognise her. At home she had always seemed large and loud, filling the kitchen with orders and laughter, but here, propped against the pillows in a faded gown, she looked small and fragile, as though someone had let some of the air out of her. A thin tube ran from the back of her hand to a bag of clear liquid.(4) Then she saw me, and her face changed completely. "Finally!" she said. "Have you been eating properly? Your mother never feeds you enough." She demanded to know my exam marks and criticised my haircut, and I felt the tight knot in my stomach begin to loosen. She was still herself, only quieter.(5) We stayed for an hour. Before we left, she pressed a folded note into my hand, as she had done every Eid since I was small, and told me not to tell my mother. In the lift on the way down, I unfolded it and found that she had written, in shaky letters along the edge, "Be brave." I still keep it in my wallet.

  1. (a) Identify a word or phrase from the text which suggests the same idea as the words given: "easily broken or harmed" (paragraph 3). [1]
  2. (b) Identify a word or phrase from the text which suggests the same idea as the words given: "insisted on being told" (paragraph 4). [1]
  3. (c) Identify a word or phrase from the text which suggests the same idea as the words given: "become less tight" (paragraph 4). [1]
  4. (d) Identify a word or phrase from the text which suggests the same idea as the words given: "unsteady" (paragraph 5). [1]
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  1. (a) fragile
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  2. (b) demanded to know
    1 mark for the exact word/phrase from the text. Also accept: demanded.
  3. (c) loosen
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  4. (d) shaky
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Q22Identifying equivalent words or phrases · Challenge · Paper 1 style · 4 marks

Read the text carefully, then answer the question. Paragraph numbers are shown in brackets.Text: The swarm(1) My grandfather had kept bees for fifty years, and he spoke about them the way other people speak about their grandchildren. So when he phoned on a Saturday morning and said, very calmly, "The bees have left. Bring a cardboard box," I knew it was serious.(2) I found him standing in his front garden, staring up at the neighbour's walnut tree. Hanging from one of its lower branches was a dark, quivering mass about the size of a football, dripping like a bunch of dark grapes. It was made entirely of bees, thousands of them, clinging to one another and to their queen somewhere deep inside. The air around it vibrated with a deep, steady hum.(3) "They're looking for a new home," he said. "Scouts have gone out to find one. If we're quick, we can offer them one first."(4) He put on his veil but not his gloves; he said he could feel what he was doing better without them. I held the box beneath the branch while he climbed a stepladder. Then, with one sharp shake, he knocked the branch, and the whole mass dropped into the box with a soft thud, like a wet sack falling. A cloud of bees rose into the air around us, roaring. I froze. Bees crawled over my hands and arms, light and ticklish, but none stung me. "Don't flap," said my grandfather. "They're not angry. They're homeless."(5) We put the box upside down on a sheet with one corner propped up. That evening, as the light faded, the last stragglers marched inside in a long, orderly column. The next morning my grandfather tipped them into an empty hive, and within an hour they were flying in and out as if they had always lived there.

  1. (a) Identify a word or phrase from the text which suggests the same idea as the words given: "shaking slightly" (paragraph 2). [1]
  2. (b) Identify a word or phrase from the text which suggests the same idea as the words given: "insects sent ahead to search" (paragraph 3). [1]
  3. (c) Identify a word or phrase from the text which suggests the same idea as the words given: "stood completely still" (paragraph 4). [1]
  4. (d) Identify a word or phrase from the text which suggests the same idea as the words given: "the last few late arrivals" (paragraph 5). [1]
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  1. (a) quivering
    1 mark for the exact word/phrase from the text.
  2. (b) scouts
    1 mark for the exact word/phrase from the text.
  3. (c) froze
    1 mark for the exact word/phrase from the text.
  4. (d) stragglers
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Q23Own-words meaning of single words · Core · Paper 1 style · 3 marks

Read the text carefully, then answer the question. Paragraph numbers are shown in brackets.Text: The wolf(1) Every summer, Gulnaz and her father took the family's sheep up to the high pastures above the village, where the grass grew thick and sweet after the snow had melted. They lived for three months in a stone hut with a roof of turf, and at night the flock was penned in a circular wall of piled rocks.(2) On the fifteenth night, Gulnaz woke suddenly in the dark. At first she did not know why. Then she realised that the sheep, normally silent at night, were restless, their bells clanking and their hooves shuffling against the stones. The dogs were growling, a low, continuous rumble that she felt in her chest more than heard.(3) Her father was already at the door with a torch and a heavy stick. "Stay inside," he said. Gulnaz waited for him to go out, then followed.(4) The moon was almost full, and the pasture was silver and black. At the edge of the pen, on a boulder, stood a shape she had heard about all her life but never seen: lean, grey and motionless, its eyes glinting green when the torchlight swept across it. The wolf did not look frightened. It looked at the sheep the way a shopper looks at a market stall. The dogs barked furiously but held back, their hackles raised. Her father shouted, swung the torch and banged his stick against the rocks. For a long moment the wolf stayed perfectly still. Then it turned, unhurried, and vanished into the darkness.(5) Neither of them slept again that night. They sat by the pen until dawn, wrapped in blankets, while the sheep slowly settled. When the sun rose over the ridge, her father counted the flock twice. Every animal was there.

  1. (a) Using your own words, explain what the writer means by the word "restless" (paragraph 2). [1]
  2. (b) Using your own words, explain what the writer means by the word "motionless" (paragraph 4). [1]
  3. (c) Using your own words, explain what the writer means by the word "unhurried" (paragraph 4). [1]
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  1. (a) Unable to stay still or calm; uneasy and moving about.
    1 mark for uneasy / agitated / fidgety / unsettled. Not 'tired' or 'not resting'.
  2. (b) Completely still; not moving at all.
    1 mark for perfectly still / without moving.
  3. (c) Slow and calm, without any sign of rushing or fear.
    1 mark for leisurely / slow / relaxed / calm.
Q24Own-words meaning of single words · Standard · Paper 1 style · 3 marks

Read the text carefully, then answer the question. Paragraph numbers are shown in brackets.Text: First snow(1) We moved from Lahore to Toronto in August, when the city was hot and green and did not seem so very different from home. My father had a new job; my mother was anxious; my little sister and I had been promised snow.(2) By November, the trees had shed their leaves in a blaze of red and orange, and the sky had turned a heavy, sullen grey. The cold was unlike anything we had known. It did not simply make you shiver; it stung the skin on your face and made your ears ache, and in the mornings the windows of our apartment were fringed with delicate patterns of frost like white ferns.(3) Every day my sister asked whether it would snow, and every day my mother checked the forecast and said, "Maybe tomorrow." We had bought thick coats, boots and gloves from a second-hand shop, and they waited by the door like soldiers ready for a battle that would not begin.(4) It came on a Tuesday night. I woke for no reason and noticed that the light in the room was strange, soft and pale, though it was two in the morning. I went to the window. Huge, slow flakes were drifting down past the streetlamp, tumbling and turning, and the street below had vanished beneath a smooth white blanket. Everything was utterly silent. The parked cars had become rounded white shapes, and the bare trees wore thin white lines along every branch.(5) I woke my sister, and we stood at the window in our pyjamas for a long time without speaking. In the morning, she ran outside before breakfast, lay down on her back in the snow and laughed until she could not breathe.

  1. (a) Using your own words, explain what the writer means by the word "sullen" (paragraph 2). [1]
  2. (b) Using your own words, explain what the writer means by the word "delicate" (paragraph 2). [1]
  3. (c) Using your own words, explain what the writer means by the word "utterly" (paragraph 4). [1]
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  1. (a) Gloomy, dark and unwelcoming (as if in a bad mood).
    1 mark for gloomy / dismal / sulky / brooding.
  2. (b) Fine, intricate and easily damaged.
    1 mark for fine / fragile / dainty / intricate.
  3. (c) Completely; totally.
    1 mark for completely / absolutely / totally.
Q25Own-words meaning of single words · Standard · Paper 1 style · 3 marks

Read the text carefully, then answer the question. Paragraph numbers are shown in brackets.Text: Breakdown on the Karakoram(1) The night bus from Rawalpindi to Gilgit was supposed to take fourteen hours. Eleven hours in, somewhere above the Indus gorge, the engine gave a loud bang, a long shudder and then nothing at all.(2) The driver coasted to a stop at a wider section of the road, close against the cliff. When the passengers climbed out to stretch their legs, the darkness was enormous. Far below, invisible, the river roared through the gorge. Above, the mountains rose like black walls into a sky crowded with stars, and the cold air smelled of rock and snow.(3) The driver and his assistant crawled beneath the bus with a torch. Ten minutes later the driver emerged, wiping his hands on a rag, and announced that a part had broken and that a mechanic would have to come from the next town, perhaps in four hours, perhaps in six.(4) Nobody complained very much. A family produced a flask of tea and passed it round. Two students lit a small fire from scraps of wood found beside the road, and people gathered round it, holding out their hands. An old man from Hunza told stories about the building of the highway, when he was a boy, and the workers who had died blasting it out of the mountain. A young couple from Karachi, on their first trip north, admitted that they were terrified of the drops and had kept their eyes closed for most of the evening.(5) The mechanic arrived at dawn, on a motorbike, with the part tied to the back. As the sun rose, lighting the snowy peaks one by one, the engine coughed into life, and the passengers cheered and climbed back on board, strangers no longer.

  1. (a) Using your own words, explain what the writer means by the word "coasted" (paragraph 2). [1]
  2. (b) Using your own words, explain what the writer means by the word "emerged" (paragraph 3). [1]
  3. (c) Using your own words, explain what the writer means by the word "admitted" (paragraph 4). [1]
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  1. (a) Rolled along without engine power, using its own momentum.
    1 mark for freewheeled / rolled without power / drifted to a stop.
  2. (b) Came out (from under the bus) into view.
    1 mark for came out / appeared / reappeared.
  3. (c) Confessed; reluctantly told the truth about something.
    1 mark for confessed / owned up / acknowledged.
Q26Own-words meaning of single words · Challenge · Paper 1 style · 3 marks

Read the text carefully, then answer the question. Paragraph numbers are shown in brackets.Text: Night watch(1) Mr Rehman had been a night guard at the city museum for twenty-two years. Every evening at seven, after the last visitors had gone and the cleaners had finished, he locked the great front doors and began his first round of the empty galleries.(2) He liked the museum best at night. Without the crowds, the rooms seemed larger and more solemn. His footsteps echoed on the marble floors, and the beam of his torch moved across ancient statues, faded carpets and glass cases of coins and jewellery, picking out a carved face here, a golden bracelet there. In the gallery of ancient pottery, the jars stood in their rows like a silent audience.(3) Some of the younger guards found the place unsettling. They said the eyes of the portraits followed them and that they heard footsteps when nobody was there. Mr Rehman only laughed. Old buildings, he told them, make noises as they cool down at night, like old men stretching their bones.(4) At half past two, on an ordinary Thursday, he heard a sound that was not the building cooling. It was a soft scrape, followed by a click, coming from the gallery of manuscripts. He switched off his torch and stood perfectly still, listening. His heart was beating fast, but his mind was clear. He radioed the control room in a whisper and moved silently along the wall, keeping to the shadows he knew so well.(5) In the manuscript gallery, a window at the top of the wall stood open, and a cat was sitting on the display case beneath it, washing its paws. Mr Rehman began to laugh so hard that he had to sit down. Nevertheless, he wrote a full report, and the next day the window catch was replaced.

  1. (a) Using your own words, explain what the writer means by the word "solemn" (paragraph 2). [1]
  2. (b) Using your own words, explain what the writer means by the word "unsettling" (paragraph 3). [1]
  3. (c) Using your own words, explain what the writer means by the word "Nevertheless" (paragraph 5). [1]
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  1. (a) Serious and dignified, with a grave, respectful atmosphere.
    1 mark for serious / grave / dignified / formal. Not 'sad' alone.
  2. (b) Disturbing; making them feel uneasy or nervous.
    1 mark for disturbing / unnerving / worrying / creepy.
  3. (c) Despite that; even so (although it was only a cat).
    1 mark for in spite of this / even so / all the same / however.
Q27Effect of one chosen example · Core · Paper 1 style · 3 marks

Read the text carefully, then answer the question. Paragraph numbers are shown in brackets.Text: The kitten in the drain(1) The crying began on Monday morning, a thin, high mewing that seemed to come from beneath the road outside our school gate. By lunchtime, half the school had gathered around the iron grating of the storm drain, peering down into the darkness.(2) Far below, on a ledge just above a trickle of black water, crouched a kitten, no bigger than a man's hand. Its fur was matted and grey with mud, and each time it cried, its whole tiny body shook. The grating was bolted down, and the drain was too narrow for an adult to climb into.(3) Our caretaker tried lowering a basket on a rope, with a piece of fish inside. The kitten stared at it and backed further along the ledge. A teacher phoned the fire service, who said they would come when they could, which might not be until the evening. Clouds were gathering over the hills, and everyone knew what would happen to the drain if it rained.(4) It was Ayesha, the smallest girl in our class, who offered to go down. The caretaker unbolted the grating with a huge spanner, and they tied a rope around her waist. She slid into the hole feet first, scraping her elbows on the concrete, and disappeared. For several minutes nobody breathed. We could hear her voice echoing up from the darkness, soft and patient, talking to the kitten as if it were a baby. Then the rope jerked twice, the signal, and the caretaker hauled.(5) Ayesha emerged filthy, grazed and beaming, with the kitten zipped inside her jacket, only its furious little face showing. The first drops of rain began to fall as the caretaker bolted the grating back into place.

  1. (a) Use one example from paragraph 2 to explain how the writer suggests that the kitten is helpless. Use your own words in your explanation. [3]
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  1. (a) Example: 'no bigger than a man's hand'. This shows the kitten is tiny compared with the adults trying to help, so it seems weak and unable to save itself, and the reader feels protective. (Other answers: 'fur was matted and grey with mud' – dirty, neglected, suffering; 'its whole tiny body shook' – terrified and cold, physically fragile; 'crouched … on a ledge just above a trickle of black water' – trapped in a dangerous place.)
    Acceptable examples: 'no bigger than a man's hand'; 'matted and grey with mud'; 'each time it cried, its whole tiny body shook'; 'crouched … on a ledge'; 'too narrow for an adult'. Mark scheme: 1 mark for a relevant example quoted from the named paragraph; up to 2 further marks for explaining what it shows and its effect on the reader. Only the first example is credited.
Q28Effect of one chosen example · Standard · Paper 1 style · 3 marks

Read the text carefully, then answer the question. Paragraph numbers are shown in brackets.Text: Before the city wakes(1) Every morning at half past four, my father unlocks the shutter of his tea stall at the corner of the bus station. I have helped him on Saturdays since I was ten, and I know his routine better than my own.(2) First the stove is lit, and the blue flame roars into life under the big blackened kettle. Then the milk is poured into a dented aluminium pan, the tea leaves measured with a spoon he has used for thirty years, the cardamom crushed under the flat of a knife. He never measures the sugar; he says his hand knows.(3) By five the first customers arrive: bus drivers yawning and stretching, sweepers in orange jackets, a policeman at the end of his night shift. My father knows most of them by name and how they like their tea. He pours it from a height into small glasses, the stream arching through the air like a ribbon of brown silk, and the foam rises frothy and pale on top.(4) As the sky lightens, the bus station begins to fill. Engines grumble, conductors shout destinations, and the smell of diesel mixes with the sweet steam of the tea. Students on their way to early classes buy parathas from the stall next door and eat them standing up. My father does not stop moving for three hours, pouring, washing glasses, taking coins, joking, and somehow remembering who has not yet paid.(5) At eight, the rush fades. He sits down on his upturned crate for the first time and pours a glass for himself and one for me. We drink in silence, watching the city wake up properly around us. It is my favourite moment of the week.

  1. (a) Use one example from paragraph 3 to explain how the writer suggests the father's skill at his work. Use your own words in your explanation. [3]
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  1. (a) Example: 'the stream arching through the air like a ribbon of brown silk'. The simile shows that he pours from a height so smoothly and accurately that the tea looks graceful and elegant rather than splashing; the reader admires his practised, almost artistic control. (Others: 'knows most of them by name and how they like their tea' – remembers every customer's preference, showing experience and care; 'pours it from a height' – a difficult technique done confidently.)
    Acceptable examples: 'knows most of them by name and how they like their tea'; 'pours it from a height'; 'like a ribbon of brown silk'; 'the foam rises frothy and pale'. Mark scheme: 1 mark for a relevant example quoted from the named paragraph; up to 2 further marks for explaining what it shows and its effect on the reader. Only the first example is credited.
Q29Effect of one chosen example · Standard · Paper 1 style · 3 marks

Read the text carefully, then answer the question. Paragraph numbers are shown in brackets.Text: Below ground(1) Our school trip to the caves had been planned for months. Thirty of us, two teachers and a local guide, climbing down an iron staircase into a cavern so large that the guide's torch could not reach its roof.(2) The guide led us along a narrow path through chambers of strange stone shapes: columns like melted candles, curtains of rock that rang like bells when he tapped them, pools so still and clear that they looked like glass. The air was cool and damp and smelled of wet stone. Water dripped somewhere in the darkness, slow and regular, like a clock.(3) It was my own fault. I stopped to take a photograph of a formation shaped like an elephant, and when I turned round, the group had gone. I could hear their voices, faint and echoing, but the echoes came from every direction at once.(4) I called out. Nobody answered. My phone torch showed only rock and three passages leading off into blackness. I chose the one that seemed brightest and walked forward, then realised it was getting narrower and turned back. Now I could not tell which passage I had come from. The darkness pressed against my small circle of light as if it wanted to swallow it. I remembered the guide's words at the entrance: if you are lost, stay where you are. So I sat down on a cold rock, switched my torch off to save the battery, and waited, counting the drips.(5) After twenty minutes that felt like a year, a beam of light swept around the corner, and the guide's voice said my name. He was not angry. He told me I had done the right thing by staying still, and that most people who got lost in the caves made it worse by trying to find their own way out.

  1. (a) Use one example from paragraph 4 to explain how the writer suggests the narrator's fear of being lost. Use your own words in your explanation. [3]
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  1. (a) Example: 'The darkness pressed against my small circle of light as if it wanted to swallow it.' The darkness is personified as a hungry creature trying to devour the only light the narrator has, so the reader senses how tiny and vulnerable the narrator feels and how close panic is. (Others: 'three passages leading off into blackness' – no idea which way to go; 'could not tell which passage I had come from' – disorientation; 'counting the drips' – trying to control fear.)
    Acceptable examples: 'nobody answered'; 'three passages leading off into blackness'; 'could not tell which passage'; 'the darkness pressed … as if it wanted to swallow it'; 'counting the drips'. Mark scheme: 1 mark for a relevant example quoted from the named paragraph; up to 2 further marks for explaining what it shows and its effect on the reader. Only the first example is credited.
Q30Effect of one chosen example · Challenge · Paper 1 style · 3 marks

Read the text carefully, then answer the question. Paragraph numbers are shown in brackets.Text: Opening night(1) The school play that year was a version of an old folk tale, and I had been cast as the king. This meant I had the most lines, the heaviest costume and a cardboard crown that kept slipping over one eye.(2) For six weeks we rehearsed every afternoon in the hall, and every afternoon something went wrong. The curtain stuck halfway. The thunder sound effect played during the love scene. Our director, Miss Farida, had developed a way of closing her eyes and breathing slowly that we all recognised as dangerous.(3) On opening night, the hall was packed with parents, grandparents and small brothers and sisters. Behind the curtain, we could hear them rustling programmes and talking. My mouth was dry, and I had forgotten my first line completely.(4) The first act went perfectly. Then, in the second act, during my great speech about justice, the painted palace wall behind me began very slowly to lean forward. I saw the audience's faces change. I heard a small child say, quite clearly, "It's falling." There was nothing in the script about this, so I simply stepped to one side, continued my speech, and gestured grandly as the wall crashed to the floor in a cloud of dust, as though I had ordered it. After a moment of stunned silence, the whole hall burst into laughter and applause.(5) Afterwards, Miss Farida found me backstage. I expected trouble. Instead she shook my hand and said it was the best improvisation she had seen in twenty years of teaching. The wall was nailed down firmly for the second night, and, to my secret disappointment, it never fell again.

  1. (a) Use one example from paragraph 4 to explain how the writer suggests the narrator's quick thinking when the scenery falls. Use your own words in your explanation. [3]
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  1. (a) Example: 'gestured grandly as the wall crashed to the floor … as though I had ordered it.' The narrator stays in role as a king, turning an accident into what looks like a royal command; the reader is amused and impressed by how cleverly the narrator makes the disaster seem part of the play. (Others: 'simply stepped to one side, continued my speech' – calm, instant decision under pressure; 'There was nothing in the script about this' – the narrator must improvise.)
    Acceptable examples: 'There was nothing in the script about this'; 'simply stepped to one side'; 'continued my speech'; 'gestured grandly'; 'as though I had ordered it'. Mark scheme: 1 mark for a relevant example quoted from the named paragraph; up to 2 further marks for explaining what it shows and its effect on the reader. Only the first example is credited.

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